What my Stanford Admission Officer said about Me

Dec 20, 2025

Getting into Stanford University as a transfer student was amazing, hands down one of the best experiences of my life. However, what made the acceptance so much more meaningful, was the note my admissions officer sent me through the mail.

Each of the things listed on my note has special meaning, and each directly connects to a piece of my personal story and Stanford application.

"From mastering Lego pieces as a child..."

References my Stanford supplemental essay about learning, and how learning to use each Lego piece to harness creativity is a skill I can use in any facet of my life.

"...to advocating for 30,000 students..."

Recalls my service as the El Camino Community College District Student Trustee, representing my constituents at both the Board of Trustee meetings and in Sacramento and Washington DC with our Assemblymember and Congressional Representatives.

"...and pursuing engineering across five community colleges,..."

Due to course limitations at my home college (El Camino College) I enrolled at five community colleges to complete the engineering fundamental courses. I also talked about this in my "Why Transfer" essay.

"...you've shown what it means to build, lead, and innovate with purpose."

Whether it was being intentional in my Lego designs, the talking points I had with my legislators, or thinking outside of the box, I've approached any problems creatively and with purpose.

"Your vision and voice will not only thrive, they will help shape what's next."

Throughout my time as a Student Trustee, I had a vision on what I wanted to accomplish and I've directly impacted thousands of students. I'll continue to use this skills in any new environment, and especially at Stanford.

"Stanford will be a better community with you in the mix, and I can't wait to see the change you will create here. Congratulations and welcome to the Farm!"

My admissions officer has faith I will continue to impact others using my skillset I developed through my leadership roles to make Stanford a better place for future students.

Wesley Marshall

Hello, My name is Wesley and I'm an Engineering College Student looking to share my explorations of STEM with the world.